tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3765291863190847310.post8910382487198569645..comments2008-04-23T20:26:01.371-07:00Comments on Grey Suit, Black Tie: Between the End of the Earth and the WaterJ Pattersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00835231457178558222noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3765291863190847310.post-33703687150251944382008-03-10T18:34:00.000-07:002008-03-10T18:34:00.000-07:00i love the last couple of lines,especially the las...i love the last couple of lines,<BR/>especially the last line.<BR/><BR/><BR/>bro i can see yr stuff get better just from the stuff posted on here.<BR/>i think yr getting more focused and centered.<BR/><BR/>Collin.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3765291863190847310.post-89019040754348337982008-02-21T14:45:00.000-08:002008-02-21T14:45:00.000-08:00Hi. My name is Lesley and I am an English Major a...Hi. My name is Lesley and I am an English Major and I know your brother Dustin. :)<BR/><BR/>I like how insightful the imagery is. There's a reason for the details, and it's done so in a rhythmic way that's important for more poetic drive prose. <BR/><BR/>I don't really know who you are besides Dustin's brother, but if you think I could help you with literary stuff just ask. I'm the Fiction editor of my school's Literary magazine, so I enjoy reading these things. <BR/>lalucas@loyno.edu (That's Loyola New Orleans)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3765291863190847310.post-9615634904522028962008-02-20T11:13:00.000-08:002008-02-20T11:13:00.000-08:00i read thisi read thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com